Bring Down the Chandeliers by Tara Hardy (A Review by Brian Fanelli)

Write Bloody Press

85 pages, $15

Bring Down the Chandeliers is not a collection of poetry for the faint of heart, prude, or squeamish. At times, Tara Hardy’s poems can be unsettling, as they address rape and incest, using raw, forceful language to do so. But in telling such a story and using poetry as the vehicle to do so, Hardy has crafted a collection that highlights how important having a voice is after surviving a tragedy.

Family is at the center of Hardy’s poems, specifically the father who raped the central female speaker. The reader is introduced to the father immediately in the opening poem “Hummingbird.” Here, the father is presented as villainous, as he tries to silence his daughter’s voice.

In the orphanage of my voice box

my father sits, fork and knife upright

on the table before him. He’s already cut

off my hummingbird and fed it

to our dog.

Despite the unsettling language and haunting image, there is hope by the conclusion of the poem because the young woman finds her voice and realizes “all the children I ever/wasn’t but was meant to be/break open the roof, take wing/and I speak/speak.”

One impressive aspect of the collection is the multi-dimensional character Hardy created in the father. In the poem “Daughter,” the father takes on several layers. The speaker, while talking to her own daughter, admits that her father “burned his name into me,” but that he also “did the dishes, cooked; taught me how to fish.” Still, though, the speaker’s pain is evident, especially toward the end of the poem.

Six years ago, crossing the state’s line

caused my body to clutch itself so completely

I couldn’t pee for three days.

Except in a long thin terrified stream.

The poem concludes with one final confession, that the speaker is not “the road of tar,” but was only “stuck to it” and was “a wingless, but determined beast.” The hope that punctuates the end of the poem is similar to the conclusion of the poem “Hummingbird” in the sense that the speaker is going to break free and find her voice, no matter the circumstances.

Hardy also addresses several other social and political issues throughout the collection. In the poem “Sand,” she takes on the persona of sand to speak out against the U.S.-led wars in the Middle East. The sand confesses that in some nations, it is not much more than a “partially closed mass grave,” and it was meant to be something else. The sand persona also wishes that it could “open my mouth and swallow” when soldiers rest their guns on it. Hardy’s decision to write about war from the point of view of sand is a fresh, innovative way to present an anti-war poem.

Another issue Hardy addresses is eating disorders, and in the poem “Hunger,” the poet presents a speaker who tries to justify having an eating disorder. “Thin is power. Hunger is/but a way to keep razors from/my wrists,” the speaker confesses, adding later that “Hunger is a way to get over him.” The constant use of enjambment adds to the unsettling effect created by some of the rationale the speaker gives for starving herself.

Hardy also offers sound advice for anyone who tries to date a trauma survivor.  In “Advice to Anyone Loving a Trauma Survivor,” she refers to some people as tourists and imagines they “press palms up to the glass, despite the zookeeper’s/’Warning!’ Don’t feed the G-Spot or she’s likely to/rip your arm off!” The poem is filled with some other funny and absurd lines, but by the second stanza, the speaker advises anyone loving a trauma survivor to “stay still” and “do not approach until she beckons.”

Hardy has a knack for developing an extended metaphor, such as a hummingbird, as a statement for finding one’s voice after surviving a tragedy. She also successfully crafts different voices and personas to address a slew of political and social issues. A few of the collection’s other poems could have benefited from stronger poetic techniques, such as extended metaphors or well-crafted personas, to prove a point more tactfully than blunt language. But like a lot of other slam/performance poets, Hardy uses direct, forceful language and stark images to convey her points. The language may come across as offensive or too raw to some readers, but Hardy does make clear how important it is to find one’s voice after surviving a tragedy. And at times, some of her lines will draw a laugh or two from readers.

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Brian Fanelli is the author of the chapbook Front Man, published in late 2010 by Big Table Publishing. His poems have also been published by The Portland Review, Pennsylvania Literary Journal, Word Riot, Blood Lotus,Chiron Review, and they are forthcoming in Yes, Poetry, San Pedro River Review, andEvening Street Review. He has an M.F.A. in creative writing from Wikes University, and currently resides in Pennsylvania. Visit him at www.brianfanelli.com.

Invasion: New Orleans?

Short notice, we know, but this, that and the other have conspired to bring us to New Orleans November 17-19. Why not host an Invasion? Why we ask you?

New Orleans peoples and surrounds, PANKsters and traveling language clowns, these questions for you, for you and your minions:

1. Where are PANK’s Invasion: New Orleans writers? Show thyselves!

2. Where is our venue? Name it!

Ideas welcome below or email editor@pankmagazine.com.

We Got A New Format

PANK got technical. Thanks to the aid of our distributor, Disticor, we are pleased to announce the release of the new PANK app, available for Apple products. $6.99 gets you the app and a digital issue of your choice. Get it, like it, show it off to your friends because you know that it is sexy as all hell.

Gallimaufry: New (And Improved?) Choose Your Own Adventures!

Lost In A Cave!

Oh, no! You are lost in a cave and you’re desperately trying to find a way out! Really, you have nobody to blame for this misfortune but yourself. Also, Daniel, who drugged you, tied you up, blindfolded you and wheelbarrowed you here.

After breaking free from the ropes that once bound you and walking for fifteen minutes, the cave splits into two passageways. Down the left passageway, you hear people screaming in pain and misery, crying for their mothers with what is undoubtedly their last breaths. From the right passageway, you hear, distantly, reruns of the 90’s television show “The Nanny.” Which way should you go?

If you go down the left passageway, turn to page 53.

If you go down the right passageway, turn to page 22.

Result: As it turns out, it doesn’t matter which passageway you go down, as both result in watching reruns of the 90’s television show “The Nanny.”

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Saskatchewan!

It’s 1874, and you’re an officer in Canada’s newly appointed North-West Mounted Police. Colonel George Arthur French has assembled you and your fellow officers and constables at Fort Dufferin, and now you’re about to set off for the notorious whiskey trading post called Fort Whoop-Up. Sadly, your equipment has seen better days.

“Sir,” you say to Colonel French, “Shouldn’t we hold out for better equipment?”

“We can’t,” Colonel French says, giving you the stinkeye. “If we don’t march west now, it could mean stunting the early growth of towns like Brandon, Regina, Medicine Hat and Calgary.” Colonel French takes a deep breath, shakes his head and says, “But I’ll leave it up to you, officer.”

What should you do?!

If you decide to wait for better equipment thereby putting the fate of towns like Brandon, Regina, Medicine Hat and Calgary at risk, turn to page 103.

If you don’t know what any of this means, and don’t really give a fuck, turn to page 2.

Result: It’s hard to compare the two given options, as this book has only 102 pages.

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Operation: Spy!

The CIA has chosen you to be one of their Elite Spies on a confidential mission. When you ask what the objective of the mission is, they tell you that it’s confidential, hence the name ‘confidential mission.’

“Yeah, but shouldn’t the spy involved in the mission know the objective?” you say.

“You’ll know when you need to know,” says your supervisor.

“And when will that be?” you ask right before getting shot in the head.

You are dead. The end.

Result: Don’t ask so many questions next time, Socrates.

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Laureate Madness!

You’ve just been named Poet Laureate of the United States of America! Congratulations! But look out! Someone in a Toyota Yaris is chasing you! Probably Donald Hall. Sure, he’s already been Laureate, but he’d rather take the honor again than let you have it. Let’s face it: Hall always was jealous of you, ever since you beat him at that villanelle-off. Yes, he followed the rigid rhyme scheme, but, Christ, his tercets! And perhaps you went too far when you said he had “Kenny-G quatrains”?

Hall sticks his head out of his car window and bellows through a megaphone, “The Laureate is mine! Beware the Yaris!”

What do you do?!

Do you finally do what you’ve been planning all these years: challenge Hall to a winner-takes-all steel-cage sestina competition, with Billy Collins serving as judge? If so, turn to page 32.

Or do you tell Daniel Tosh—who is sitting next to you in the passenger seat—to take the wheel so you can jump onto Hall’s car, sneak through the open passenger-side window and negotiate some kind of truce? Turn to page 122.

Result: In either case, you crash your car into a lamppost. When you wake up, Daniel Tosh gives you a drink of water to help you “recuperate,” except that Daniel actually drugged the water, which was part of his plan to steal the Laureate honor. Next thing you know, you’re being blindfolded and wheelbarrowed to the middle of a cave.

Relentless and Dark and Sharp Sheets of Rain

Laura Ellen Scott’s Death Wishing is now available for sale but you can also get the Kindle version for FREE on Amazon so go and do so but also consider buying the book.

The new Sink Review includes poetry by Brooklyn Copeland and Ben Fama (1, 2).

Robb Todd’s Steal Me For Your Stories, is available for pre-sale from Tiny Hardcore Press (yes, shamelessness). Also available? Shut Up/Look Pretty, an anthology featuring chapbooks by Lauren Becker, Erin Fitzgerald, Kirsty Logan, Michelle Reale, and Amber Sparks.

Speaking of Robb Todd, a. what symmetry in a name, right? and b. he has a new story in Wigleaf as well as a postcard.

Shane Jones has a novel excerpt in Smallwork, a journal from Ben Marcus.

At A-Minor, very short fiction from Michelle Reale.

Over at Bomb, you’ll find fiction from Lincoln Michel who also has a short story in the new issue of The Collagist where he is joined by Blake Butler, the amazing Luke Geddes, and much more.

Dennis Mahagin has a poem at Used Furniture Review.

Elizabeth Hildreth has poems (1, 2) in Sixth Finch, where she is joined by Daniela Olszewska (and Carol Guess). That dynamic duo also has work in the new issue of Diode where they are joined by Bob Hicok, Joshua Ware, and others.

At Housefire, short fiction by Colin Winnette.

Mensah Demary is featured in Fwriction Review.

In the new Word Riot, Micah Dean Hicks.

The debut issue of Uncanny Valley features Blake Butler, Rachel Adams, Laura LeHew, Gabriel Blackwell, Brian Oliu, and Robert Alan Wendeborn. Go here to order this fine looking magazine.

It Was Strange—The Sky Just Opened

First thing you should do is read Sean Doyle’s essay at The Rumpus. You will be moved.

Pangur Ban Party’s Very Beautiful Women features a great many very beautiful women and work from contributors Ani Smith, Frank Hinton, Sarah Rose Etter, xTx, Feng Chen, Brandi Wells, Meghan Lamb, Molly Gaudry, and Nicolle Elizabeth.

Kirk Nesset’s Burn is featured at Good Men Project.

Sunday Service at HTMLGIANT brings a poem from Anthony Madrid.

Two new pieces from James Valvis, at Fwriction Review and Staccato Fiction.

There’s a new essay by Jen Michalski in Baltimore Fishbowl.

Luke Goebel has a wonderful, frenzied story in Wigleaf.

Fiction from Aaron Burch is up at Everyday Genius. You’ll also find work from Myfanwy Collins.

In Metazen, two poems by Dennis Mahagin.

Snow Falls for Janey Smith in Housefire.

Blake Butler’s nonfiction book, Nothing, about insomnia, is out now. He also gets fancy as hell with a write-up in Time.

At Used Furniture review, two poems by Rose Hunter and a story by Ashley Bethard.

On The Paris Review blog, Nick Antosca writes about PANK contributor Innocente Fontana/Todd Grimson. Todd’s book, Brand New Cherry Flavor (amazing), has just been re-released.

Gary Percesepe has a poem in Pure Slush.

Gallimaufry: Just Another Day At The Gym

Boot Camp Class

Okay, everyone, let’s start with some stretches! Ready? O-kay. Let’s begin with the arms in the air, and raise them…and raise them…and raise them! Come on, people, you just got caught swallowing 1.2 million dollars in canary diamonds you were going to “evacuate” later tonight at Applebees and the cops caught your ass red-handed! So raise those hands! That’s it, you’ve got it! Now sway left…and…right…and left…and right! Come on, dodge those bullets!

Okay, you’re doing great! The cop decided to let you go after you bribed him with your ex’s old Movado. But just in case he changes his mind, let’s run like the goddamn wind! Come on, let’s bolt. That’s it, run in place! One foot in front of the other, people. Oh, man! He sure is fast! Better pick up speed. Faster…and faster…and faster! Now, jump to your right, behind the Taco Bell Dumpster!

Phew. That was a close one. Think we lost him. Crazy how this is the exact same Dumpster where Sandy gave birth to her little boy after hooking up with that bagger from the Sav-Mart, isn’t it? Life’s fucked up.

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New Gym Equipment: The Counselor

– Sit down in The Counselor.

– Insert arms into arm-locking device.

– Press fire-engine-red ‘Engage’ button with your chin. Relax, as arm-locking device fully embraces your arms.

– Press cherry-red ‘Halt’ button with chin when arm-locking device causes subtle pain. (Note: DO NOT press fire-engine-red button.)

– Extend neck to allow face-covering mask to cover your entire face. Make sure to keep your mouth open to allow “Talking Bit” into your mouth.

– When face-covering mask vibrates, begin disclosing any problems you’re experiencing in your “life.” (Note: this is no time to be shy.)

– When you’re finished, tap the “End It” kick pedal with your left foot. (Note: DO NOT tap right kick pedal.)

– Relax as face-covering mask removes itself and arm-locking device releases your arms. (Takes about 12 minutes for entire process.)

– Insert twenty-dollar bill into moneyslot. The Counselor will print out your “life” interpretations and any advice/recommendations.

– Thank The Counselor for its help.

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Exercising Tips

One of the keys to every exercise is this: remember to breathe. I knew this one guy in a spinning class who simply refused to abide by this advice and he suffered some serious consequences, including death. I told him, “Jim, you should probably breathe during this,” and he was all like, “Whatever.” I told him, “Well, if you don’t breathe, then ‘Whatever’ will be your last word,” and he said, “No it won’t.” Turned out he was right. Then he died.

Like I said, breathing is just one of the keys. The other is stretching. I stretch for a good two-and-a-half hours before actually exercising, although everybody’s different. Some people have to stretch out for days. It’s like, “Hell-o! I’ve got stuff to do! I can’t be stretching out for days!” But those people have no choice. Poor schlubs.

But I think the third and most important key is try to not to get a hernia.

Follow these exercising tips and you’ll be buff in no time. Good luck!

And Just Like That, An Unexpected Heat Came Over Us

The fall issue of Menacing Hedge features a story by Michelle Reale and three poems by Margaret Bashaar (1, 2, 3).

In the new issue of R.K.VR.Y., Anne Leigh Parrish and others.

Ryan Bradley’s chapbook, Mile Zero, is available from Maverick Duck Press.

Congratulations to Gabe Durham who is now editor of Dark Sky Magazine. He is joined by Christy Crutchfield as fiction editor.

Carrie Murphy will be food blogging for Hello Giggles in a column called Eat of the Moment!

Seven Incisions, by Garrett Socol, is included in the October issue of Underground Voices.

In Salamander, Jeremy Allan Hawkins and many others.

Nicholas Ripatrazone has a story at Used Furniture Review. He is followed by Barry Basden.

Over at Precipitate, you’ll find short fiction by JA Tyler and others.

Aubrey Hirsch is Miss October for American Short Fiction.

Smokelong Quarterly 33 features Katy Resch, Micah Dean Hicks, Joe Kapitan, Sara Lippmann, Mather Schneider, and Amber Sparks.

Robert Swartwood’s Phantom Energy is available for only $.99 on Amazon. I’ve read an earlier version of the chapbook and it’s well worth checking out–a fine collection of very short fiction.

J. Bradley has work in The Legendary, The New Verse News, Vinyl Poetry, Housefire, HOOT, and he wrote the introduction to the new issue of Kill Author.  In other news, all the words have been used up. You will have to recycle.

In Vinyl Volume 4, you’ll also find Caroline Crew.

Kill Author 15 is as excellent as you would expect. You’ll find Alec Bryan, Ashley Farmer, Alexis Pope, Caroline Crew, Eric Beeny, Keith Nathan Brown, MG Martin, KMA Sullivan, Peter Schwartz, Tania Hershman, Tess Patalano and others.

October elimae features Ryan Ridge, Matthew Vollmer, Joseph Goosey, Nicolle Elizabeth, Geordie de Boer, and much more.

At Everyday Genius, you’ll find Little Bears by Jennifer Pieroni. You will also get a little something from Barry Graham.

In Drunken Boat, Janis Butler Holm, James Valvis, and Rachel Levy.

In The Collagist podcast, you can listen to Jonathan Callahan read from Bob.

The fall issue of BLIP includes a story by Mark Budman.

The Chill in the Air is Perfectly Crisp

Weekend Fiction at the Good Men Project features a story by Faith Gardner.

Garrett Socol has two new stories: WE KNEW WHAT IT WAS BY THEN, and AFTER THE CHAMPAGNE.

Two poems by Brett Elizabeth Jenkins appear at Metazen.

At Used Furniture Review, two poems by Helen Vitoria.

There is very short fiction by Andrea Kneeland at Camroc Press Review.

Eric Burke has three small poems (1, 2, 3) in issue 44 of Right Hand Pointing. He is joined by Mather Schneider.

A-Minor features poetry by Bill Yarrow.

This short film about Luca DiPierro’s work is so wonderful.

Christy Crutchfield has a story at Housefire.

The Lit Pub, a Molly Gaudry project, rides again.

Rick Fellinger’s short story collection, They Hover Over Us, is the winner of the 2011 Serena McDonald Kennedy Fiction Award and will be published by the award sponsor, Snake Nation Press

Emprise Review 21 is upon us with Todd McKie, Joe Kapitan, Richard Thomas, and others.

Jen Michalski brings her talent to Urbanite with her story St. Joan.